Dolby

Dan,
You have reserached into the different areas but your summing up of findings(How the reserach has informed your planning) is a bit general. Your Real Media Srtefacts are all quite varied genres and therfore it makes it hard to catre  to your audience/ It doesn't really reflect what you have learnt to help with your video in particular; consider what it tells you about audience, layout, genre, marketing etc so you are making something that SPECIFICALLY targets YOUR intended audience.